Dear Mr. Phelps,
It is our pleasure to tell you that you've been accepted into the
engineering program at Stockton University. We look forward to seeing you in September.
You have every reason to be on cloud nine about getting into Stockton. This year we received an unprecedented number of applications for the engineering program. Yours was one of 100 successful ones out of a pool of over 10,000! This is a vote of confidence in your background. You have the education, experience, and personal qualities that we look for in a Stockton engineer.
Your next step is to fill out the intent to register and mail it back to our office. Then you will be officially registered for the autumn term. Our records also indicate that you're an international
student. Don't forget to complete the meal plan and housing forms and get them back to us as soon as possible.
After the paperwork is done, the real fun begins. You don't need to wait until September to get to know Stockton. There is a Facebook group that helps students introduce themselves and network before the term begins. You may even find a new friend or roommate before the first day of class.
You should be very proud of your success.
Warm regards,
Jimmy Smits
親愛的菲爾普斯先生：
我們很榮幸地通知您，您已獲准進入史塔克頓大學工程學程就讀，我們期待九月與您相見。
您有充分理由為進入史塔克頓感到欣喜，今年的入學申請為數眾多，盛況空前，您是一萬多名申請人中，成功獲准錄取的百位申請者之一！正式錄取是對您的一種肯定，代表您擁有史塔克頓工程師所需具備的學經歷和個人特質。
您的下一步是填妥「就讀意願書」，並以電子郵件回傳系辦公室，即可正式註冊秋季班課程。我們的紀錄顯示您為國際學生，請別忘記購買餐券及填寫住宿申請表，並盡快傳送回函。
等相關書面作業完成後，真正的樂趣才要開始。您不必等到九月才能認識史塔克頓校園，本校設有臉書社團，可以讓學生於開學前自我介紹和互相交流。您甚至可以在開課前找到新朋友或室友。
您應該為自身成就感到自豪。
誠摯的祝賀
吉米．史密茲
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